This is a breakdown of In the Eyes of the Beholder so far:

Prologue: Dead Wrong -  A sacrifice made for love...may turn out to be a huge mistake.

Chapter One: Oh, the Bitter Irony - Ugly is taken to a whole new level.

Chapter Two: Undeniably Shallow - First impressions seriously affect a relationship...Wonder what Inuyasha's will be?

Chapter Three: Intrigued - She was the only one who ever tried to get to know him...So naturally, he was interested

Chapter Four is still being written. I'm currently on the second page, but I may not be able to update for a week or two because I anticipate this being a long chapter, maybe 20 pages at the most.

I am in desperate need of two more beta readers. I already have one and she is still currently editing the prologue (I hope). Four chapters (out of what? like 25?) are already written, but I would like for some betas to proofread it.  I believe I need help with:

+ Grammar - apparently I need help with this? I don't know
+ Characerization - I want to have believable, realistic characters
+ Plot that makes sense to more than just me
+ And whatever else you can find wrong with my story

I am a little sensitive, but I believe that I really need an objective viewpoint on my story as well as constructive critcism...A little shove in the right direction can only help! ^_^

For the first four chapters (that desperately need editing), please check out my profile. There are three links. If you are interested, then either e-mail me or leave me a comment. Gracias!

I realized that I was talking about my fanfics so much in my regular journal (nubian_queen89), that I might as well make another account based solely on my fics.

So here, I will be babbling about updates, writer's block, reviews, beta readers, sites, etc. Nothing big, but if you like my fics, then friend me! :D